The reason this story scares me is all the stuff I'd want to write about: fun-house mirrors, rear-view mirrors, lasers, even disco balls. All embodied by the Spirit of the Mirror.
And I haven't even finished in ancient China, where the magic mirror begins his memoir:
I began as a plain round mirror of bronze, fashioned in the
early part of the Han Dynasty. By
“plain” I mean I had no will or consciousness, but by the standards of the West
I was beautiful and ornate. My golden face was flawlessly smooth, thanks to the
bronze-smith’s two belligerent apprentices, who constantly fought or gambled
with each other; whoever lost had to take the next turn at polishing me.
My reverse side, in the manner typical of Han mirrors, was
molded with a central knob surrounded by a square, representing China
itself. Chevrons at its corners divide the circle into the “Four Sea s ”
– that is, everything outside of the Middle Kingdom proper. This, of course,
required four triligands and four elshapes for the proper balance. Between
here and the rim were more symbols of equally obvious cosmological
significance, and the rim was an arabesque of dragons.
Actually, this was during the Year of the Rooster; the use
of the Holy Ones instead was simple flattery. This was unusually blatant of Liu
An, but considering the plans he had for me, he’d need all the help he could
get.
Hey, the Year of the Rooster - my year! Sweet. I love the descriptions here. Very detailed. Keep it coming!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. You got my curiosity.
ReplyDeleteI love the detail, and the premise is brilliant. I always wondered what a magic mirror thought about! More, please!
ReplyDeleteThe details make this so interesting, and I love that it is from the POV of a mirror. This mirror has a great tone. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat premise and strong details. Before they were famous - magic mirror edition. I'm hoping to see some tragedy in its back story and anxious to see where you take it. Entertaining read.
ReplyDeleteNice voice for an inanimate object, and good premise.
ReplyDeleteI like the descriptions of the mirror. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteCool!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting! I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteI haven't read anything from the point of view of an object before. Very creative.
ReplyDeleteFascinating detail about the construction of the mirror - is this real and historical, or something you created? It feels extraordinarily real, so if it is something you imagined I am really impressed. Actually, if it's real, I'm impressed by the research that must have been needed. Either way, it's a very effective snippet - thanks!
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