Friday, March 29, 2013

SCI FI FANTASY SATURDAY MAR. 30: "A Mirror Reflects" pt. 3

Has it really been almost a month since I last posted? Scandalous!  Here's the next ten sentences -- honest! --  of "A Mirror Reflects" (trying a new title). As you recall, we learned that the ancient Chinese mirror was originally crafted by someone named Liu An:



         Yes, the legendary Liu An. He was the one who designed me and commissioned the bronze-smith’s work, and after I was delivered to him, the real task of creation began. 
         Liu An had been a court astrologer to his nephew, Emperor Wu, for some years, and he needed a more efficient way to help the Emperor deal with those around him. Which tribal warlords were a true threat, and which could be pacified by a royal marriage? Which courtiers held the Emperor’s interests at least slightly above their own? Which scandals should be concealed, which ones ignored, and which ones turned to his advantage?
         Diplomacy and spying could tell only so much, but just as there is no hiding from fate, that fate cannot hide from one who reads it in the stars.
         Any competent practitioner of Zi wei dou shu can plot a birth chart; all he needs is the year, month, day, and time of the subject’s birth, and to know how to integrate the strokes in the characters that make up the subject’s name.  But to truly understand the relevance of the Yin and Yang, the positions of the Symbolic Stars, the fluidity of the classical Five Phases, and countless other factors – this requires a true master of the science.
         The Old Prince, as Emperor Wu’s courtiers respectfully called Liu An, was such a one; he could interpret these disparate elements, understand a person’s crucial traits and qualities, predict his current and future relations with family and associates, and do no less than calculate the subject’s destiny.

9 comments:

  1. Just goes to show you that such things are not as cut and dry as some would make you believe.

    I'm picturing a meme to go with this snippet. It would be Boromir with the caption, "One does not simply hide from fate."

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  2. Brilliant snippet. Very detailed but not overly so. Brings out the historical basics in astrology and the science behind plotting one's destiny (or understanding the guidebook). Excellent!

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  3. I remember what happened with the last talking mirror.... Something about sending a huntsman off to kill some sweet young thing. But this one sounds a little more serious--and not necessarily invested in the simple purpose of a mirror. Nice!

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  4. I think this hits the mark of giving us something that we're familiar with but putting a new and interesting spin on it. You're taking the material in a new direction and as a reader, we want to see where it's going and how it stacks up to the original mythos. The detailed approach you're taking explores a whole dimension beyond, "Mirror, mirror" Great job!

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  5. So he's going to put that knowledge into the mirror?

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  6. Wow, this sounds epic! lol.

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  7. Lovely snippet! The history is fascinating!

    And I like the new title, too.

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  8. Very interesting--especially since I have a soft spot for ancient Chinese history.

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  9. I'm with TK. The detailed history makes the snippet rich, not overly full. It gives the creation of this mirror a lot of weight.

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