Friday, September 13, 2013

SCI FI FANTASY SATURDAY SEPT. 13: How was your date?

There's no SF or Fantasy in this snippet, but I don't want to cheat, so maybe I'll find a way to include it in Calamity Jane.

   "So how was your date with Priscilla?"
   "Well, did you ever have one where your date picked out something they were sure would be fun for both of you -- but was wrong? And when they saw you weren't having fun, they figured they just had to try harder -- and that made it worse?"
    "And you had one of these nights?"
    "No. She did."

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5 comments:

  1. Haha! Love this. Sounds like me with some of my friends. Some people, there's just no pleasing them, right? I love the set up here, curious to see how it plays out.

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  2. I love the end. Very funny.

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  3. Ha! I agree with Tara, nice ending. I think a lot of people have been there and can relate.

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  4. Heh! Shame. Hope things go a bit better next time?

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